Friday, September 13, 2013

My FIrst draft

Mastewal Abate
World History I
Patricia Andrews

Paleolithic Era is happened 150,000 years ago. They are a very simple and easy people who lived in Africa. They were the first human beings who lived in this earth. They were very small and they used old/simple stone tools. Their life, culture, ideas and loves life has storied behind. There society filled with a lot of freedom. No boss or any powerful person in each person’s life. Our roots and bases come from this generation but they are very egalitarian than latter society in all their life style.
My first reasons that I said Paleolithic’s are more egalitarians than other society is because of their love ideas. “But I did have lovers and so did he …. Because affairs … is something that even people from long ago knew. Even my father’s father’s father knew. There have also always been fights where poison arrows are shot and people are killed because of that. Having affairs is one of the things God gave us….” (Page 49) This quote shows me how the Paleolithic’s people are very free for what they want to do. Doing affairs is the worst thing in this society and very sin for any kind of religions but for them affairs is like a gift from God. Any one can do it. Especially for women’s they proud of it because they have just lovers or they own lovers on the top of their marriage. The wife’s are doing it also husbands. This is shows how egalitarians from latter society because none of latter society support affairs.
My second reasons that I said Paleolithic’s are more egalitarians than other society is because of the way they felt about their lost. “In your heart, your child, your mother, and your father are all equal. When any one of them dies, your heart feels pain”. (Page 49) This quote shown us how everyone is equal in his or her life. In modern society when we lost any member of family in any circumstance we felt so much pain but it depend on the person who dies our pain has different levels. In Paleolithic’s society when someone past away they felt the same pains for dad or husband, child or brother, the sorrow is the same.
My third reasons that I said Paleolithic’s are more egalitarians than other society is because of the life style. In this society there is no agriculture, offices, governments and low. No one is on a batter place than another. No one has to obey to other unless they want to.  They can have anything they want in the world. They can kill any animal any time they want to eat. They can go far away and own the land as much as they want. No one can say anything to him or her. They had so many freedoms to live in this world.
In Paleolithic’s society there is no better man or better women they are equal. Any thing that the man does also women does it.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi! I am trying to get extra credit, too, if you need any help writing or rewriting a paper for this class, I would be happy to tutor! I am an English major :)
    -Meghan

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