My FIrst draft
Mastewal
Abate
World
History I
Patricia
Andrews
Paleolithic Era is happened 150,000 years
ago. They are a very simple and easy people who lived in Africa. They were the
first human beings who lived in this earth. They were very small and they used
old/simple stone tools. Their life, culture, ideas and loves life has storied
behind. There society filled with a lot of freedom. No boss or any powerful
person in each person’s life. Our roots and bases come from this generation but
they are very egalitarian than latter society in all their life style.
My first reasons that I said Paleolithic’s
are more egalitarians than other society is because of their love ideas. “But I
did have lovers and so did he …. Because affairs … is something that even
people from long ago knew. Even my father’s father’s father knew. There have
also always been fights where poison arrows are shot and people are killed
because of that. Having affairs is one of the things God gave us….” (Page 49)
This quote shows me how the Paleolithic’s people are very free for what they
want to do. Doing affairs is the worst thing in this society and very sin for
any kind of religions but for them affairs is like a gift from God. Any one can
do it. Especially for women’s they proud of it because they have just lovers or
they own lovers on the top of their marriage. The wife’s are doing it also
husbands. This is shows how egalitarians from latter society because none of
latter society support affairs.
My second reasons that I said
Paleolithic’s are more egalitarians than other society is because of the way
they felt about their lost. “In your heart, your child, your mother, and your
father are all equal. When any one of them dies, your heart feels pain”. (Page
49) This quote shown us how everyone is equal in his or her life. In modern
society when we lost any member of family in any circumstance we felt so much pain
but it depend on the person who dies our pain has different levels. In
Paleolithic’s society when someone past away they felt the same pains for dad
or husband, child or brother, the sorrow is the same.
My third reasons that I said
Paleolithic’s are more egalitarians than other society is because of the life
style. In this society there is no agriculture, offices, governments and low.
No one is on a batter place than another. No one has to obey to other unless
they want to. They can have
anything they want in the world. They can kill any animal any time they want to
eat. They can go far away and own the land as much as they want. No one can say
anything to him or her. They had so many freedoms to live in this world.
In Paleolithic’s society there is no
better man or better women they are equal. Any thing that the man does also
women does it.
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